(my first review)

story 1/10: was reading the reviews before and a guy was talking about how he couldn't find the story and the more I thought about the story wait what story. I mean (spoilers) when he and a group of people come across the room where he gains his powers he NEVER tries at least searching for clues on how he got the powers he just accepts it hopefully that will change when his dad comes back from the 7/11 (I'm trying to be vague so no one gets and ideas but you would think they would touchback on his dad) and where I'm up to he hasn't used any effort to find that place and don't get me started on that they forgot about the punishment thing from the start and how he gained his special skill.
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you might say the story is him climbing the ranks to support his family and pay for his mother's hospital bills but I feel this is a crappy story since EVERYONE in that world has the same objective to climb the ranks and make money.

art 10/10: some pretty nice art I mean if this was an art gallery this would be a 10/10 all I gotta say is there are some nice visuals

character 3/10: I feel after the first 40 chapters probably less he becomes an empty husk of a human. At the start yeah he wanted to help his family but then all he wanted to do was do raids on these gates with guilds. And I mean his life was barely ever threatened so there was no character development to be seen. he has a sister you sometimes see but forget about.

enjoyment 7/10: this manhwa has its ups and downs I feel if you wanna be committed just stop at chapter 108 if not just stop at chapter 80 I mean I just don't have a life. now that I look back I'm pretty sure that the story was by a kindergarten since I feel like the MC needs to feel defenseless at least once other than the start of the manhwa and I know it's like the point of the whole manhwa but it chokes you screaming at you that the MC is OP Eg: chapters 106, 114, 109 and this is in just in a range of 8 chapters.

overall 6/10