Short, weird, cute

Story: 7/10
Weird plot, I feel like it landed itself really well to the 17-page format, extending it further would only be detrimental

Art: 6/10
Cute, could be cutter. Well done and satisfactory

Character: 7/10
OK, obviously the characters don't get much development in 17 pages, but still they feel like real people, they manage to express their backstory in the way they act, and not in by saying it.

Overall (7/10)
Short, weird and cute. There is not much more to say, it is really short so i recommend you give it a try.

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Short, weird, cute

Story: 7/10
Weird plot, I feel like it landed itself really well to the 17-page format, extending it further would only be detrimental

Art: 6/10
Cute, could be cutter. Well done and satisfactory

Character: 7/10
OK, obviously the characters don't get much development in 17 pages, but still they feel like real people, they manage to express their backstory in the way they act, and not in by saying it.

Overall (7/10)
Short, weird and cute. There is not much more to say, it is really short so i recommend you give it a try.